I like how You repeat the shape of the broken branch to illustrate a the triple redundancy backup. The water sketch is a great way to inspire the Art Director to brake up the page. Nicely done.
Larry Ross August 27, 2007
Leo and Bob are right about the contrast and the strong black imagery, but my experience is that most art directors and editors feel that a color illustration should be all color. I don't think it's always right but it tends to be the nature of the beast. Nice job, RAG!
Rob Dunlavey August 29, 2007
Keep doin' your thing Rich. Sketches and final are all slick.
Mary Beth is a fine person to work for. Hi-tech magazines are not everyone's cup of tea but you excel at these conceptual pieces. Who says editorial's dead?!